I can tell you put a lot of work into this. The colors are solid for the most part - Neptune's hair looks the best out of the features and I love how Uranus's dress is colored and shaded. Angles and foreshortening looks well, specifically in Neptune's upturned side profile and the torso of Uranus.

Uranus looks more curvy - feminine build - than Neptune. I think that if you gave Neptune's back a more curve inward, it'd look more awesome than it is :3. Neptune's neck is a little too thick, too (but you could just hide it with her hair :3 - I mean more so than what her hair is covering now).

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Thanks for the tips Wild. I really worked hard on this one. I tried to make Uranus a little more feminine, I guess I should have put that in my comments.

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Aww, this is beautiful. I love the emotion felt in this!

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Aww, I really like this one! Uranus looks gorgeous, I love the look on her face, she looks very loving! Neptune looks a bit more timid and worried for some reason. I think her face just came out a bit too small, and that might be why, because the body-language speak a whole 'nother story! Then again, that could be a cool idea, Neptune secretly worrying about her lover when Uranus' not looking!

That aside, I think Wild made a lot of good points, so I shan't be a boring and repetitive (much )! Neptune's arms came out really good both in line-work and anatomy-wise, but the hands and fingers seems a bit shapeless in comparison to the rest of the arm. Also, I agree with the feet, they have a bit of the same problem as the fingers, a lack of a definite shape.

So, onto my favourite part, the colouring! Yay for prisma, and huzzah for blender! The colouring looks great, and I love the hight-lights in this one! I think you can get even bolder with the shading, branching out in areas of the picture that's not defined by the lineart, such as the chest-area, collarbone, etc. I think that'll give your picture even more definition.

You're definitely improving, both in line-art, anatomy and colouring, it's so fun to witness!

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Thanks you! Things I forget to put in the artist's comments on purpose. I wanted to make Neptune look timid and submissive, since she is the one sitting on the floor.

Thanks for the anotomy tips. I had such issues with hands, but we know about those already.

I can't wait to branch out and try new things with colouring.

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Thank you! I was hoping to convey that.

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This is cute. I love this couple.

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Thank you for the critique. (I am replying here because DA won't let me reply to the critique) It was very helpful. I do like this new feature.
I have been stressing about Neptune's neck, and next time I do a pose like this where the hair just covers the neck, I may change the position of the hair so the neck doesn't look so thick.

And that thing on Neptune's butt is a sig/mark so people don't steal my stuff.

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